Thoughts entangled
Heart wrenched
Eyes red . . . .
Spirit shackled
Mind depressed
Eyes red. . . .
Emotions mishandled
Feelings cheated
Eyes red. . . . .
Hopes derailed
Beliefs shattered
Eyes red. . . . .
Intentions propelled
Path mislead
Eyes red. . . . .
Steps tumbled
Fears groomed
Eyes red. . . . .
Laugh crumbled
Moments poisoned
Eyes red. . . . .
Self blamed
Actions trailed
Eyes red. . . . .
Eyes red. . . . .
3 comments:
nice one.....the tittle first suggested that as if the following work will be on naxalism or on china.... more justice could have been done with the colour RED....but yea the poem captures the emotion very well....
@ enjoyneer
Eyes red would have been a very obvious title... i thought RED would be a intriguing title
naicce!!!!!!!
and an apt title at that too..
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